Scene
Number. 1
Page
Number. 1
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Middle
of the street. Night.
Endpoint
of previous scene. No
previous scene.
Characters
in scene 3
Hooded youths (Michael, Ricky and Scott) and Geoff who is a middle
aged man.
Point
of scene To
encourage enigmas about what's going on as to the identity of the
youths and their motives and to advance the story. To establish who's
good and who's bad.
Conflict
The
3 youths steal the car and Geoff (whose car it is) runs out into the
middle of the street to intercept the car's path. Gary gets hit by
the car and is left for dead. The youths drive away with Geoff's car.
Ending/central
question Is
Geoff ok? Who are the hooded youths? Why do they need the car?
Key
micro elements employed and brief description of their use Camera
work. Sound.
Scene
description (without dialogue) focusing on key Micro aspects
(mise-en-scene, camera, sound, editing, etc)
Cuts
are used often and shots are shaky to show how hectic the situation
is for all parties. The youths because they're in a rush to steal the
car and get away combined with the surge of adrenaline and Geoff
because his car is being stolen so he feels obligated to prevent its
theft; he also has a lot of adrenaline. Shots will be unconventional
and incoherent to further emphasise how panicked the youths are.
The
scene would have a lot of shouting as to (once again) show how hectic
the situation is and how urgent the youths are to obtain Geoff's car.
There would also be fast-paced music to further reflect the rush of
the situation and how the adrenaline goes from a peak to rock bottom.
The music will fade out as the camera pans to Geoff's body. Sirens
can be heard briefly before a cut to the next scene.
Scene
Number. 2
Page
Number. 2
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Int.
Worn down, abandoned warehouse. A couple hours after the theft
Endpoint
of previous scene. The
youths escape with the car and Geoff is left for dead in the middle
of the street.
Characters
in scene. Michael,
Ricky and Scott.
Point
of scene. To
show the aftermath of the robbery and to help establish each
character's personality.
Conflict.
The
three argue about the theft as if they are bragging saying what their
roles were in the job. Each character is trying to top the other's
last statement. Each person recounts the story in a way that makes it
seem that they did the most in order to have more credibility.
Ending/central
question. Why
they needed the car in the first place. Why they seem proud of what
they'd done.
Key
micro elements employed and brief description of their use. Acting.
Scene
description (without dialogue) focusing on key Micro aspects
(mise-en-scene, camera, sound, editing, etc). The
characters now have their identities shown and show how they
differentiate in personalities. E.g. Michael is the ring leader,
Ricky has been friends with Michael for years so he stands by him and
goes along with what he does (whether he likes it or not) and Scott
is shown to be less important than the other two but has been
manipulated to make him tag along and he can be a great asset to the
trio. There will be a use of verbal and non-verbal communication in
an attempt to really show what each individual character is like. As
previously mentioned, Ricky is unsure whether he likes this lifestyle
so what he says may not particularly match with how he acts; while
the other 2 are arguing you can see that Ricky seems hesitant and
like he doesn't want to be there through the use of acting. This will
cause the viewer to be empathise with Ricky because they begin to
understand that Ricky has some good inside of him and his intentions
were good (to stick with his friend) but now they have gone sour.
This is the problem he faces, does he leave his friend since
childhood or does he stay knowing that what he's doing is not right.
This is the first scene each character is introduced to us explicitly
so each actor needs to portray each character according to their
personality. Michael will need to have an established authority over
the two (especially Scott). Ricky needs to seem likable but still an
antogonist and Scott needs to be quieter and being almost like a
sidekick; he doesnt explicitly seem important but he's needed to get
the job done.
Scene
Number. 3
Page
Number. 4
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Psychiatrists
office. Shortly after Geoff is released from hospital (around a week
after the theft of his car).
Endpoint
of previous scene. Cuts
at a CU shot of a doubtful Ricky's face while hearing the other two
debate about who did what.
Characters
in scene. Geoff.
Dr. Powers (Geoff's Psychiatrist)
Point
of scene. To
show both sides of the crime. We have previously seen the criminals
so now it is time for the victim. The victim is not shown often in
films and I feel that it will have more realism if the victim is
shown in mine. It takes away the escapism that you get from
spectating the criminals and you can now see how Geoff has become
scarred from his traumatic experience.
Conflict.
Geoff
is clearly distressed as it has been a week and there is no news of
the arrest of the three boys. This discontent is also mixed with
frustration as he does not have his car back and is unable to walk
without the support of a crutches for a couple months.
Ending/central
question. Will
Geoff have justice? Will his mental and physical scars heal?
Key
micro elements employed and brief description of their use. Lighting.
Camera.
Scene
description (without dialogue) focusing on key Micro aspects
(mise-en-scene, camera, sound, editing, etc). Lighting
is important in this scene because it is set in a psychiatrists
office so the light has to look as though it would relax anyone
getting a consultation. There is a warmness to the moderate amount of
light which is calming to look at. Geoff will be slightly less lit
than the Dr. Powers to symbolise that he is very dissatisfied with
his current situation and to symbolise Geoff's state of mind. There
will be a frequent use of close up shots and 2 shots to not only
portray how Geoff is feeling but the mutual trust between Geoff and
Dr. Powers.
Scene
Number. 4
Page
Number. 6
Slug-line.
Int.
Worn down, abandoned warehouse. Same as scene 2. A couple days after
we sar them last, however, it is now daytime.
Endpoint
of previous scene. Meeting
between Geoff and Dr. Powers ends.
Characters
in scene. Michael
and Ricky.
Point
of scene. Ricky
opens up to Michael about how he doesn't want this lifestyle anymore.
Conflict.
Ricky
opens up to Michael about how he doesn't want this lifestyle anymore
which is met by a negative response and an argument ensues. The two
have different objectives in this scene so them staying together is
near impossible, however, Michael convinces him to stay.
Ending/central
question. Will
their relationship be the same? Is this the end of Ricky's criminal
ways.
Key
micro elements employed and brief description of their use. Acting.
Camera.
Scene
description (without dialogue) focusing on key Micro aspects
(mise-en-scene, camera, sound, editing, etc). Good
acting and use of shots is vital in this scene as Ricky's desire to
leave becomes more and more conspicuous while Michael softens up a
little and encourages him to stay. A use of close ups and two shots
will be necessary in this sequence as the emotion the actors are able
to communicate in this scene is vital. The two actors need to show
that the two characters both have different objectives in this scene
so them staying together is near impossible, however, Michael
convinces him to stay.
Scene
Number. 5
Page
Number. 9
Slug-line.
An
alleyway in similar conditions to that of the original theft. At
night.
Endpoint
of previous scene. Ricky
and Michael now have tension as Michael feels as though he can't
really trust Ricky anymore, however, (like Scott) he is a valuable
asset.
Characters
in scene. Michael,
Ricky and Scott.
Point
of scene. The
audience now sees what life is like for the two after their previous
meeting. This scene is the first time they are committing crime
together since the car theft.
Conflict.
The
three are planning another robbery, however this time, it is a
smaller scale. The local shop. This discussion is led by Michael and
an unusually vocal Scott; this is because the main discussion usually
takes place between Michael and Ricky while Scott tags along but
because of the last scene, Ricky is practically mute. Michael notices
Ricky's lack of input and makes a remark to Ricky about how he "used
to do this for fun" but is no longer willing because he's become
a coward. This is the straw that broke the camel's back for Ricky and
he snaps, brutally attacking Michael. A fight ensues but Ricky ends
out on top with an unconscious Michael. Ricky, in fear of going to
jail warns Scott that he "saw nothing" to which Scott runs
for his life.
Ending/central
question. Is
Michael okay? Will we see Scott again? What does this mean for Ricky?
Key
micro elements employed and brief description of their use. Sound
and lighting.
Scene
description (without dialogue) focusing on key Micro aspects
(mise-en-scene, camera, sound, editing, etc). The
fight should take place in a silhouette so that it is up to the
audience to interpret what happens. All sound in this scene will be
diegetic as I aim to create a more realistic fight with the sounds of
cars, night life and the sound of punches. This use of diegetic sound
compensates for what the audience does not see and also contrasts the
abstract style of the silhouettes so that there is little confusion
as to what is going on.